a5b5935
Dec 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / Discussion about a short example in my essay [9]
Thank you so much!!!
Definitely it helps!!!
Thank you so much!!!
Hope this would help you!
Definitely it helps!!!
a5b5935
Dec 10, 2012
Writing Feedback / Discussion about a short example in my essay [9]
Just a student in class, maybe the sentence can be changed into "For example, one day a question about Landau quantization was raised in class. "
I'm writing the draft of a professor's evaluation. He's too busy to write it all by himself
Thank you so much!!
who is this student who asked the question?
Just a student in class, maybe the sentence can be changed into "For example, one day a question about Landau quantization was raised in class. "
....then if you are Andy, why do you say "Andy came to me after class " ?
I'm writing the draft of a professor's evaluation. He's too busy to write it all by himself
Thank you so much!!
a5b5935
Dec 9, 2012
Writing Feedback / Discussion about a short example in my essay [9]
sorry, I don't make it clear.
My name is Andy. It is written in another person's view
This is Andy who solved the problem, didn't he?
sorry, I don't make it clear.
My name is Andy. It is written in another person's view
a5b5935
Dec 9, 2012
Writing Feedback / Discussion about a short example in my essay [9]
Thank you very much!!
I often make mistakes in writing English.
At the end of the example, I wrote "He thought out of the box and solved the problem completely." I think it kind of demonstrate my originality in thought. Do you think it is too weak?
Thank you very much!!
I often make mistakes in writing English.
At the end of the example, I wrote "He thought out of the box and solved the problem completely." I think it kind of demonstrate my originality in thought. Do you think it is too weak?
a5b5935
Dec 7, 2012
Writing Feedback / Discussion about a short example in my essay [9]
Thank you very much for helping me!!
I have a short example in my essay. And I'm not sure whether it's appropriate to illustrate my ability and whether I write it without some grammar mistakes.
For example, one day a student asked a question about Landau quantization. It seemed confusing that it is possible to have a negative magnetic quantum number. I don't answer this in class because of the time limit. Andy came to me after class and pointed out that the center of orbit is not necessarily at the origin. He thought out of the box and solved the problem completely.
Thank you for your time!!
Thank you very much for helping me!!
I have a short example in my essay. And I'm not sure whether it's appropriate to illustrate my ability and whether I write it without some grammar mistakes.
For example, one day a student asked a question about Landau quantization. It seemed confusing that it is possible to have a negative magnetic quantum number. I don't answer this in class because of the time limit. Andy came to me after class and pointed out that the center of orbit is not necessarily at the origin. He thought out of the box and solved the problem completely.
Thank you for your time!!
