newport
Nov 11, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Standing up and my Cheerleading experience' - college entrance ut austin [3]
It is very good, but way too long.
You should take out some parts.
I also think you should start it with a better hook or something more catchy.
It is very good, but way too long.
You should take out some parts.
I also think you should start it with a better hook or something more catchy.