synz
Nov 16, 2012
Undergraduate / University of California Application essay prompt 2 - "Perseverance" [5]
rockingthesea
the idea is good.
rockingthesea
the idea is good.
synz
Nov 16, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'Learnt how to type with 10 fingers' - A New Expermient essay [4]
Thanks for your usefull ideas.
Thanks for your usefull ideas.
synz
Nov 14, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'Learnt how to type with 10 fingers' - A New Expermient essay [4]
Topic: A new experiment
Hello, I have studied English for 6 months and this is my writing. If you can please correct my writing and show me your opinions about it. Thanks!
To try new some things are really attractive. It gives me many interesting experiments I have not had before. One month ago, I decided to join a class at computer center to improve my typing. Before that. I had taken a lot of time for a short paragraph. To type a passage with 200 words in one hour, it was really slow. But my problem had solved after I was finish class. I learnt how to type with ten fingers that was really useful for my job. My speed was faster than before and I had a few mistakes. Now, typing is not my a nightmare.
Topic: A new experiment
Hello, I have studied English for 6 months and this is my writing. If you can please correct my writing and show me your opinions about it. Thanks!
To try new some things are really attractive. It gives me many interesting experiments I have not had before. One month ago, I decided to join a class at computer center to improve my typing. Before that. I had taken a lot of time for a short paragraph. To type a passage with 200 words in one hour, it was really slow. But my problem had solved after I was finish class. I learnt how to type with ten fingers that was really useful for my job. My speed was faster than before and I had a few mistakes. Now, typing is not my a nightmare.
