rahullmantri
Nov 26, 2012
Undergraduate / personal statement of sarah: 'college is one of the scariest dreams' [4]
blueeyes816
Growing up my mother has always told me, "Not going to college is not an option," but for some reason I never thought putting my life into a five hundred word personal statement would be this hard.
You should write a good thesis statement that captures the reader at the end of the first paragraph. Try working on that.
And, I guess this works fine : I have put a lot of thought into my college decision, and Saint Mary's is number one on my list
blueeyes816
You should write a good thesis statement that captures the reader at the end of the first paragraph. Try working on that.
And, I guess this works fine : I have put a lot of thought into my college decision, and Saint Mary's is number one on my list