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spawne   
Jan 3, 2013
Graduate / 'process control engineering' - Graduate application: letter of intent [4]

Please help review not just the grammar but also the letter format. I will be grateful if suggestions are given me on what more i should include. Thank you.

Dear Sir/Madam:
I am applying to the XXXX with specialization in YYYY for the educational year 2013/2014. It is my ambition to be a process control engineer and I believe that advanced training in a reputable graduate program will help actualize that dream.

My fascination with process control engineering dates back to my final year at the university. It required applying comprehensive knowledge of chemical engineering plus understanding the chemistry of reactions. I found that interesting as it was challenging and this influenced my choice of undergraduate project where I developed a controller for a biodiesel transesterification process in a Continuous Stirred Tank Reactor. All the activities of control engineering require extensive knowledge of mathematical theory. Whether it is in constructing models that fully characterize the process or solving the developed models in order to simulate and study its dynamics. Hence, to successfully practice as a control engineer, it is imperative that I possess advanced knowledge of mathematical modeling and its applications.

That is why the ZZZZ program is a lifetime opportunity for me. With a course structure that will provide me with a stronger background in mathematics and offer me the opportunity to specialize in the modeling of complex systems, I cannot imagine a more rewarding way to apply the next two years of my life. Also, for me, the program goes beyond just gaining a first-class mathematical knowledge. I get the chance to interact, exchange ideas and learn from bright minds from various parts of the world, learn the language and culture of the German and Italian people and generally see the world from a different perspective. I anticipate becoming a better mathematician, a brilliant engineer and a well-rounded human being. The program is absolutely amazing!

In the bid to be thoroughly prepared, I take out time to study the test questions uploaded on the program website to keep informed as to what the program entails and am certain that with the knowledge I have acquired both during my undergraduate course and personal study, I will excel in the program. While awaiting the opportunity to learn from experienced professionals, I have had tremendous success in studying the Riccati differential equation and I look forward to applying my results in developing more efficient control systems.

I yearn for the knowledge this course offers and if its aim is to train students who are readily open to new knowledge, prepared for any challenge and constantly trying to devise new and better means of solving problems, then you should choose me. It would be a great privilege to be a part of the Mathmods program and I am quite confident that I will match the high standard it sets. I hope the admission committee considers me for the AAAA scholarship and thus, give me the opportunity to acquire the knowledge I need to fulfill my dreams.

Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.
Sincerely,
Abia Ubong
spawne   
Jan 3, 2013
Undergraduate / Germany|Masters| Mechanical Engineering; SOP Evaluation [2]

As a graduate in Mechanical Engineering, I look for seek a Master's Degree to refine my knowledge and skill set in areas of my interest.

Being an ardent adventurous ardently adventurous,I dare to claim that, throughout my life, curiosity has been the main feature of my personal character.
spawne   
Dec 23, 2012
Graduate / letter of intent/ Chemical Engineering / Graduate studies [3]

please help review this.
Letter of intent

My interest in control engineering dates back to my final year in the university. It required applying al the knowledge of chemical engineering,plus understanding the chemistry of reactions and i found that interesting as it was challenging. All the activities of control engineering require extensive knowledge of mathematical theory. At the very heart of control engineering lies mathematical modeling and in order to construct models that fully define the process, and develop reliable control systems, advanced knowledge of mathematical modeling is required.

That is why the *** program is a lifetime opportunity for me. With a course structure that provides me with a strong mathematics background and still gives me the opportunity to specialize in the modeling of complex systems, i could not have asked for a more rewarding way of spending the next two years of my life.

Also, for me, the program goes beyond gaining a first-class mathematical knowledge. I get the chance to interact, exchange ideas and learn from bright minds from various parts of the world,learn the language of the german and italian people and generally see the world from a different perspective. I become a better mathematician, a brilliant engineer and a well rounded human being. The program is amazing!

My interest in mathematics goes beyond the areas required to function as a chemical engineer. While awaiting the opportunity to learn from experienced professionals, i have been studying the riccati differential equation with tremendous success and i look forward to applying my results in developing more efficient control systems.

I have been thinking of how best to express my meed to be in the graduate program without coming off as desperate, but the truth is, i yearn for the knowledge this course offers and if its aim is to train students who are readily open to new knowledge, prepared for any challenge and constantly trying to devise new and better means of solving problems ,then you should choose me.

With a keen interest in mathematical modeling and a lot more than a strong drive to succeed, i hope the admission committee considers me for admission, thus, give me the opportunity to acquire the knowledge i need to fulfill my dreams.
spawne   
Nov 22, 2012
Graduate / Personal Statement for masters in process systems engineering [NEW]

This site has been helpful to alot of people,i just hope you can extend the favor to me. I will be applying for graduate studies in the uk. Please help give corrections and better suggestions regarding my statement of purpose.

Here it goes:

My interest in process design dates back to my first time in an offshore production platform. I recall marveling at the size of the vessels, the complex piping network and just how different it was from what I was used to on paper. What struck me most however, was the thought of how the engineers came up with an efficient automation of the production process such that, for every possible problem that could occur, they had mitigations in place. To me, it felt like they possessed the ability to predict the future. Since then, I have had my mind set on a career that will not only enable me model and design, but also develop control mechanisms for processes.

With the knowledge of mathematical modeling, process design and control theory acquired during my undergraduate study, I now have a better understanding of the underlying principles governing these engineering activities. Also, while in the operations department of the YOHO production platform in Exxon Mobil, I was introduced to the Distributed Control System (DCS) which cabinets for all the integrated controllers and intelligent devices furnished on the platform and learned how to use it in stabilizing the process conditions of the plant. This prompted my choosing a topic in control theory as an undergraduate project where I developed a control for the biodiesel transesterification process of methanol and palm oil in a Continuous Stirred tank Reactor using a Proportional -Integral Controller.

While my project made me appreciate the level of imagination and problem solving abilities required in process control, it also triggered questions in my mind such as: How do I integrate individual model based design into a multi-scale project? How best can I optimize my process and manage the associated risks in my design? My lack of answers has increased the urge for an advanced knowledge of the subject and this has led to my choice of Process Systems engineering as a course of graduate study.

As a trainee in the coiled tubing unit in Schlumberger, I obtained practical knowledge of how to dissemble, analyze for faults and reassemble equipment like the Blow-Out Preventer, Injector Head, valves and special tools like the packer. This has greatly developed my logical and cognitive skills, which in turn influenced how I tackle problems presently. Obligated to offer best service, the tools were worked on in groups before and after a job to ensure smooth operation. My approach towards work has been affected positively by this method as it taught me the importance of teamwork and safety.

Differential Equations, for me, govern engineering researches and my goal, presently, is studying those related to Process Systems Engineering and devising analytical methods of solving them as this will help minimize the error that may be introduced using numerical methods and in turn help develop more efficient process design. While awaiting the opportunity to learn from experienced professionals, I have begun work on the Riccati differential equation with appreciable success and I look forward to applying my results in developing better control systems.

Being a leading institution and pioneer in the field of PSE, XXXX not only provides the environment that allows for advanced learning and innovative thinking, but also has the academic staff to inspire excellence and confidence in the students. As such, I realize that admission into the graduate school is highly competitive. However, considering myself qualified and prepared for any challenge, I will take my chances with the best. With a keen interest in PSE and a lot more than a strong drive to succeed, I hope this statement demonstrates that I am a strong candidate for admission to XXXX graduate school.
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