guyinblue
Dec 5, 2012
Undergraduate / Should I make it more personalized?Extra Curricular Common App Entry: [2]
Just to be clear, this is the reply to the 1000 character EC prompt right?
3rd line. : Diversity, not only pertaining to race, although that is very important to our group, is Exeter's strong suit
Maybe its just me but to me this sounds a little weird and id probably change it to something like this? --- Diversity, not only pertaining to race, which too is very important to our group, is Exeter's strong suit.
2nd last line :pursuit Change it to pursue.
Now I could be wrong, but thats where i felt the mistakes were.
Hope this helped. :)
All the best!
Just to be clear, this is the reply to the 1000 character EC prompt right?
3rd line. : Diversity, not only pertaining to race, although that is very important to our group, is Exeter's strong suit
Maybe its just me but to me this sounds a little weird and id probably change it to something like this? --- Diversity, not only pertaining to race, which too is very important to our group, is Exeter's strong suit.
2nd last line :
Now I could be wrong, but thats where i felt the mistakes were.
Hope this helped. :)
All the best!
