Undergraduate / The Power of Perseverance - PS; My mom has always told me that quitting is not an option [5]

I think your essay is excellent and you clearly write very well. Keep it up, proofread always.

Undergraduate / 'Started to attend church regularly' -The one that impacted my life the most, A&M Essay A [3]

I think your essay is nice, it tells of where you have been and the changes that you
Have been through and how these changes have affected your outlook towards life.
It is a well written one