Writing Feedback / Are parents the best teachers? they play a dominant role [2]

In fact there are usually some conflicts between parents and their young children because they have different or even opposite ideas,thoughts and interests; However, from my perspective , parents definitely play a dominant role in their children's life. Since they are the only persons who has brought them with difficulty,care and kindness.

To begin with, parents are the first persons a child will see in his or her life. Children grow in their family and learn several things from their parents. Parents are those who teach their little child several basic skills such as learning to walk,talk,eat and so on. In addition to these skills, they fullfil their demands in the best way. Obviously a good teacher is the one who gratifys all of your fundemental needs. Therefor parents are truely the childrens best teachers.

Alternatively, children spend their early years of life time in a same house with their parents. In some countries children live with their parents untill they are 18; However, in other countries,like my country, they live with their family until they get married, so it is evident that their parents can profoundly influence them. Children will surely learn a lot from their parents' experiences. They benefit from a mother who fosters them and teach them moral lessons and a father who help them to be strong. These lessons are the chief lessons that anyone can ever learn.

Finally, parents deeply love their children. They are always ready to sacrifice their time,money even their life, to their children; hence, they will always help their children in critical situations by advising them and teaching them lessons,which no teacher can ever teach.

All in all, as far as I'm concerned, parents are the greatest teachers, who are always next to their children ,ready to give them whatever they want. For this reason it is really shameful for those young people who treat their parents rudely. Every one should respect their parents and honour them as if they are the only precious thing they have.

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Writing Feedback / 'Not being hopeless' - Working in a group or working independently? [2]

Some people prefere to implement their works,researches and investigations all by themselves; However, some choose groups inorder to accomplish their tasks.As far as I'm concerned,participating in a group has defenitely a lot more benefits than working individually, such as creating and achieving a better result

, having more time for focusing on our work and being motivated spritually.

Although diverse ideas and thoughts among people of a group may cause some difficulties, this diversity of opinions may help to create a masterpeice.Eventhough by working individually , we can lead our work in our ideal way, in a group each different idea considers different aspects of a subject , so the result will surely be more thorough and complete.

Alternatively, by working in a group , we will have lower responsibilities; therefor, by spending more time on a specific part of the work or project, we will be able to centeralized all of our effort on it's details; hence, what we have done will be more focused and of course more precise.

Finally, doing a project or a research along with others gives us incentive.Also the group's support encourages us continuing our work with more interest.Yet working alone may sometimes makes us too feel hopeless. For example it is probable that one person doing a huge amount of project looses his hope for finishing it and succeding.

In brief, cooperating will avoid us from being hopeless ,helps us to concentrate on details and gives us a chance to obtain better results.in my estimation a group work will ensues in a great accomplishment.I think every one should join groups for every task and work in their life.

Writing Feedback / You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park ,a national park, regional park [2]

Parks has always been comfortable,interesting places, in which children,young people,and elder people spend their afternoons or mornings. Surely the scene and the parks view really affect people's opinion and feeling about a park. As far as I'm concerned, government and municipility have to build such places and accomodate them to attract young people and children. So I think it will be great, if they try to have a routine service for cleaning the park, plan to decorate the park and to add some facilities.

First of all, a clean park will definitely impress people. If a park is dirty ,no one will be eagered to come to this park because every one goes to park to relax and to be a way from all of stresses that life has put on him or her. Forexample the trafic the polluted weather and so on. So parks must be clean to help people feel comfort and breath fresh oxygen.

Alternatively, people will enjoy a beautiful parks with several plants and trees more. I certainly bielve a budget must be allocated to plans,decorating the park and growing flowers and trees. Flowers of course make the park beautiful and colorful. Trees produce oxygen, making the environment fresh and oxygen energize people. Additionally, ornamenting a park with some statues or some modern pieces of art, will impress several artists and those who admire art, so more people will be attracted , and the park will soon be famous.

Finally, every park must has certain features and facilities. Expanding the park ,if there is free space near it, is another good plan. In addition to it, building cafes or fast foods are really effective in attracting more people; moreover, adding some instruments for sport, like those that are in gyms, and places for playing some sports such as basketball and tennis, are other convenience plans that government should consider.

All in all, according to all of these suggestions, a normal park can be developped to wonderful place with more care and with more budget. Government by creating these places and making them comfortable and amusing, not only will benefit, but also brings a healthy place for young people to gather and spend their time.