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Posts by KnyazKnyazev
Joined: Dec 12, 2012
Last Post: Dec 29, 2012
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KnyazKnyazev   
Dec 29, 2012
Writing Feedback / First Snow - Winter has begun. [6]

Snow (is) soft, clean

All of them sheltered -> Snow covers everything:

help them spend the winter. -> help them survive in this winter
KnyazKnyazev   
Dec 29, 2012
Writing Feedback / First Snow - Winter has begun. [6]

The main thing is to dress well -> the most inmportant thing

building (build ) snow tower

All enjoyed (enjoy ) the first snow than (but ) drivers urban transport (public transport ), they should work hard in this day.
KnyazKnyazev   
Dec 29, 2012
Writing Feedback / First Snow - Winter has begun. [6]

as if there was happened something extraordinary

Even just glancing at the window, you know, on the street today is lighter than usual -> Even just after looking at the window, u realize that it is lighter than usual on the street today

First snow - hence (means ) the beginning of winter

Although snow can melt, even the air grow warmer, but still snow - it is a sign that winter is coming (Has come ).
KnyazKnyazev   
Dec 12, 2012
Undergraduate / Reflection; This course work helped me improve my drawbacks and enhance my knowledge [8]

This work was very useful and interesting for me. This is a very topical and modern theme in this rapidly developing high-tech world of information. I was really fascinated by the work on this topic because this theme is very close to me. Also the task was not so easy and work volume was great consequently it helped me to develop personal qualities such as diligence, attentiveness. Moreover this course work contributed to the emergence of interest in Informational Technologies consequently it had great influence on expanding my knowledge in the field of technologies. Besides I was deeply impressed by working in the Excel and this work helped me to improve my knowledge of creating and editing tables, charts and using various kinds of formulas.

Despite all advantages of this work I had some difficulties as well. On the one hand it was difficult to choose the components of personal computer for my family. Due to rapidly developing in technology field there are huge amounts of different components of computer so it was problematic to choose the most suitable one because all of them have special features. Hence, after careful consideration of all parameters, the best choice was determined. But there is another side of coin; this difficulty helped me to improve the skills of analyzing and defining the best components so it will be easier to build my future computers thanks to this course work.

To sum up, this course work helped me to improve my drawbacks and update my knowledge. The next time when I get the same task I will fill the tables in Word and Excel simultaneously because I think it is a good way to do not waste a lot of time.

p.s. please help me to find mistakes and maybe reconstruct sentences
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