Elizabeth934
Dec 14, 2012
Scholarship / HSF:Describe a recent academic challenge you have faced. Explain how you overcame it. [6]
I think you are a great writer and that your essay effectively describes your passion for academic success. I'm finding it difficult to find constructive criticism to offer... Perhaps you could elaborate on your daycare job and explain how it made the pursuit of your education more difficult. I would just be careful not to make it sound like your getting off topic, you know? I'm not sure if this advice is helpful... Let me know if it is. If you have any specific questions, I would be happy to try to answer them.
I think you are a great writer and that your essay effectively describes your passion for academic success. I'm finding it difficult to find constructive criticism to offer... Perhaps you could elaborate on your daycare job and explain how it made the pursuit of your education more difficult. I would just be careful not to make it sound like your getting off topic, you know? I'm not sure if this advice is helpful... Let me know if it is. If you have any specific questions, I would be happy to try to answer them.