rossy
Dec 15, 2012
Undergraduate / I had adventure first,explanations?Later / Common App [4]
Common app essays..short essay prompt.Write on an extracurricular activity or community service you took part in?
below is my essay please i'll appreciate any help offered
Holiday at the end of my 11th grade was shortened. I had to wake up at 4am and singing every day, I lost my voice. Man'o'war (a leadership training program)was in my school but not having to eat school food, I was glad. We always ran and if you were late, you frog-jumped.We sang in languages I didn't understand. I doubt even the trainers did."Early morning tea" turned out to be jogging and falling (while still singing). We had a daily roll call though I wonder why as you couldn't think of being absent. Being the duty officer was so interesting. 'All sections sit up!';I always cracked up that phrase (of course I was cautioned for that). We had Paralympics and really you can't play football with no arms. Cooking in the bushes while fanning flames for as long as the meal's cooking time and cooking noodles with no fire.The first day I thought of hours of sleep I'll miss, on the last day,i realized I'll miss Man'o'war.I had adventure first,explanations?Later.
Thanks
Common app essays..short essay prompt.Write on an extracurricular activity or community service you took part in?
below is my essay please i'll appreciate any help offered
Holiday at the end of my 11th grade was shortened. I had to wake up at 4am and singing every day, I lost my voice. Man'o'war (a leadership training program)was in my school but not having to eat school food, I was glad. We always ran and if you were late, you frog-jumped.We sang in languages I didn't understand. I doubt even the trainers did."Early morning tea" turned out to be jogging and falling (while still singing). We had a daily roll call though I wonder why as you couldn't think of being absent. Being the duty officer was so interesting. 'All sections sit up!';I always cracked up that phrase (of course I was cautioned for that). We had Paralympics and really you can't play football with no arms. Cooking in the bushes while fanning flames for as long as the meal's cooking time and cooking noodles with no fire.The first day I thought of hours of sleep I'll miss, on the last day,i realized I'll miss Man'o'war.I had adventure first,explanations?Later.
Thanks