Undergraduate / My favorite Korean bands; ''Kpop"/ What do you do in your freetime essay? [8]

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Superjunior, T-ara, Chocolat, 2NE1, SHINEe, Sistar, and Younique might seem like odd names, but these are the names of my favorite korean bands i listen to in my freetime. My friends don't understand my tastes in music when I tell them about it, but nontheless I listen to it everyday, much to their annoyance anyway. When I saw the vid for "Oppa, Oppa" by Eunhae, I was delighted to see their music video and dance along with them. I love Kpop because it lets you feel loose and dance like no one is lookin. The optimistic upbeat sounds help bring my moods up if I'm havin a bad day. That is one reason why I love kpop so much-its infectious positive music that makes you want cavort and dance around. ...