auro052594
Dec 26, 2012
Undergraduate / My name is Sae Buck Lim Won / Note to a roommate [3]
thank you MNJ! After reading your comment, I tried to start my essay in a different point of view.. Would you review it again please?
Nice to meet you! I am Sae Buck (don't worry if you can't pronounce it, you can call me Aurora) and I am your future roommate! Do you spend time imaging yourself in campus? I do, and one of the most important parts of my ideal campus life is you. But don't feel burdensome; I am just so excited about having a roommate.
Let me introduce myself. More than half of my day is accompanied with music. I love k-pop and Korean idol groups such as 2NE1 and SHINee. I also like classical music, especially those of the baroque era, and also ballad. I don't like movies but I do like reading every genre of books. I also like sports, my favorite sport is basketball. I remember that I started playing basketball when I heard that this sport will help me to become taller, which never happened to me (I am 153 cm short). I am absolutely not good in giving advises but I've been told that I am a good listener. I hope you like listening too, because I talk a lot, too much sometimes. I don't like animals and never had a pet. But I think that having a mascot for our room will be a good idea. I like outdoor sports but I also enjoy being indoors. A couch, a notebook, a pencil, my diary and a drink are my must-haves in time of study or work.
As we are going to live together, I think this is a great opportunity to share things, enjoy together and to rely to each other. I am going from a little country of South America called Paraguay and feeling as home in the campus may take me a few weeks. I hope I could be of help to get involved within the people and vice versa.
thank you MNJ! After reading your comment, I tried to start my essay in a different point of view.. Would you review it again please?
Nice to meet you! I am Sae Buck (don't worry if you can't pronounce it, you can call me Aurora) and I am your future roommate! Do you spend time imaging yourself in campus? I do, and one of the most important parts of my ideal campus life is you. But don't feel burdensome; I am just so excited about having a roommate.
Let me introduce myself. More than half of my day is accompanied with music. I love k-pop and Korean idol groups such as 2NE1 and SHINee. I also like classical music, especially those of the baroque era, and also ballad. I don't like movies but I do like reading every genre of books. I also like sports, my favorite sport is basketball. I remember that I started playing basketball when I heard that this sport will help me to become taller, which never happened to me (I am 153 cm short). I am absolutely not good in giving advises but I've been told that I am a good listener. I hope you like listening too, because I talk a lot, too much sometimes. I don't like animals and never had a pet. But I think that having a mascot for our room will be a good idea. I like outdoor sports but I also enjoy being indoors. A couch, a notebook, a pencil, my diary and a drink are my must-haves in time of study or work.
As we are going to live together, I think this is a great opportunity to share things, enjoy together and to rely to each other. I am going from a little country of South America called Paraguay and feeling as home in the campus may take me a few weeks. I hope I could be of help to get involved within the people and vice versa.