Book Reports / Thesis from a paragraph of "King Lear" [5]

My Thesis ("King Lear")

okay guys..
so I'm new here.. and i hope i get a reply before tomorrow morning..
its URGENT..
THIS THESIS NEEDS TO BE PERFECT. lol

can you guys give me feedback on my thesis statement.
whether it needs corrections or re-arrangements.
our teacher asked us to utilize the "not only.. But also" type thesis.. so here it goes:

In "King Lear" several themes are evident, not only does Shakespeare introduce popular themes such as love and deceit, but also weaves in the intricate and symbolic theme of blindness.

thanks, guys!

Research Papers / Help with Religion Assignment? [10]

hey!
well..
you can start of by going to
biblegateway.org
which is a place where u can access the Bible..
in a million different versions..

i'd say you look into the NIV version..
just cus its easier to understand :P
and type in Mark in the search box..
that'll take you directly to the Book of Mark :D

hope that helps a little