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Persuasive Music Essay Thesis

Hello Everyone!
I'm writing a persuasive music essay, and I'm having trouble with getting a truly brilliant thesis... For the essay I have to choose a debatable topic that is specific and easy to follow. I'm also supposed to show pro's and con's in this paper.

Here is the thesis I am thinking of using:
Classical music, though some say it is boring, stimulates the brain making the listener more focused, calm, and opens more creative pathways in the brain.

If there is any wording, ideas, or anything that should/could be fixed I'm very open to hearing about it!
thanks:)