hieupm
Jan 22, 2013
Writing Feedback / What could be the best job in the world? [5]
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Thank you very much, I'm going to fix it :D
Any comment?
hieupm
Jan 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / What could be the best job in the world? [5]
Thank you for taking the time to look at this. Any critique is greatly appreciated.
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What could be the best job in the world?
Chosing a job is a big question which everyone are asked when they jump into their real life. For each person, the term "the best job" is very divers. There are some people who want a stable life - going to work at 7o'clock in the morning and come back home at 6 o'clock in the evening everyday to get their monthly salary. But, there are also people who want to conquer difficult challenges for winning a great career. Follow me, "the best job" must make me flexible, matches my personnality, my skills and my interests. And, the problem called "money" is also important, "the best job" have to be affordable my life.
Fistly, I want to say "no one can be perfect" . Everyone improve themselves everyday. Me too, I must determine my personnal strength and weakness to find a suitable job. Studying in technical environment, I have opportinuties to build reasoning and problem solving skills. It's the very useful skills in society. Morever, I can work with tools and equipment easily and focus on the problem at hand. But, unfortunately, I have been lacking listening, speaking and working with other. "The best job" will help me to improve my personal strengths and correct my weakness.
Sorts of interested activities and subject also decide which job be good for me and you. I want to be able to communicate easily with the the people around me like a great presenter naturally speaking in front of many audiences. Travelling and participating in collective activities are interesting too. I could enrich my knowledges and acquainted with many peoplel. Working in the field of technology, in particular in the domain of IT is also a problem that I care. Simply because technology make life better, additionally I could utilize knowledge learned at university.
The most important thing that a best job could have is affordable a living. You won't work without being paid. Money isn't the main purpose of life, but it means the necessary tools to survive. Sometime, but not always, I use money to evaluate the job I am doing.
For example, I want to be a R&D staff in IT enterprise. In addition to research and development work, I am involved in many new projects to earn extra money besides the monthly salary. During these projects, I can also utilize the knowledge learned at school and study more for improving myself. Working in many projects allow me make friend with many colleagues. Sometimes, it gives me the opportinuty to travel around the world.
These are all my personal ideals about the problem called "the best job in the world". Try to match my personality, interests, knowledges and age with a suitable position is always my first priority. "Don't be afraid to venture out and try new things". What do you think about it, please share with me.
Thank you for taking the time to look at this. Any critique is greatly appreciated.
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What could be the best job in the world?
Chosing a job is a big question which everyone are asked when they jump into their real life. For each person, the term "the best job" is very divers. There are some people who want a stable life - going to work at 7o'clock in the morning and come back home at 6 o'clock in the evening everyday to get their monthly salary. But, there are also people who want to conquer difficult challenges for winning a great career. Follow me, "the best job" must make me flexible, matches my personnality, my skills and my interests. And, the problem called "money" is also important, "the best job" have to be affordable my life.
Fistly, I want to say "no one can be perfect" . Everyone improve themselves everyday. Me too, I must determine my personnal strength and weakness to find a suitable job. Studying in technical environment, I have opportinuties to build reasoning and problem solving skills. It's the very useful skills in society. Morever, I can work with tools and equipment easily and focus on the problem at hand. But, unfortunately, I have been lacking listening, speaking and working with other. "The best job" will help me to improve my personal strengths and correct my weakness.
Sorts of interested activities and subject also decide which job be good for me and you. I want to be able to communicate easily with the the people around me like a great presenter naturally speaking in front of many audiences. Travelling and participating in collective activities are interesting too. I could enrich my knowledges and acquainted with many peoplel. Working in the field of technology, in particular in the domain of IT is also a problem that I care. Simply because technology make life better, additionally I could utilize knowledge learned at university.
The most important thing that a best job could have is affordable a living. You won't work without being paid. Money isn't the main purpose of life, but it means the necessary tools to survive. Sometime, but not always, I use money to evaluate the job I am doing.
For example, I want to be a R&D staff in IT enterprise. In addition to research and development work, I am involved in many new projects to earn extra money besides the monthly salary. During these projects, I can also utilize the knowledge learned at school and study more for improving myself. Working in many projects allow me make friend with many colleagues. Sometimes, it gives me the opportinuty to travel around the world.
These are all my personal ideals about the problem called "the best job in the world". Try to match my personality, interests, knowledges and age with a suitable position is always my first priority. "Don't be afraid to venture out and try new things". What do you think about it, please share with me.