applenpeach
Feb 17, 2013
Graduate / Specialize in Signal processing & VLSI; SOP in VLSI, MS [4]
I also think your SOP is a little wordy. Is there a word limit for this?
I also think your SOP is a little wordy. Is there a word limit for this?
applenpeach
Feb 17, 2013
Letters / Modern Coummunication/ Semina on IPTV; letter of recommendation [3]
Miss.Ameesha P atil. I have...
with confidence and in a lucid manner.
All the best!
for Miss. Ameesha patil I have
Miss.Ameesha P atil. I have...
with confidence and lucid manner
with confidence and in a lucid manner.
All the best!
applenpeach
Feb 17, 2013
Graduate / Computer- An inevitable necessity! ; SOP SUNY Buffalo [2]
Not a proper sentence, how about "The Computer era has revolutionized our present day world" .
Nice essay! All the best.
The Computer era has made revolution in our present day world
Not a proper sentence, how about "The Computer era has revolutionized our present day world" .
Nice essay! All the best.
applenpeach
Feb 9, 2013
Graduate / Specialize in Signal processing & VLSI; SOP in VLSI, MS [4]
The introduction is not strong enough(this is just what I think)
SIR M.VISVESVARAYA INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY,an esteemed institution.
I always had the ambition
Good luck!
I would like to introduce myself as Goldie Kapur. I have completed my bachelor of Engineering in Electronics & Communication from SIR M.VISVESVARAYA INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY an esteemed institution .I always have the ambition of pursuing the MS program right from my childhood days.
The introduction is not strong enough(this is just what I think)
SIR M.VISVESVARAYA INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY an esteemed institution
SIR M.VISVESVARAYA INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY,an esteemed institution.
I always have the ambition
I always had the ambition
Good luck!
applenpeach
Feb 9, 2013
Scholarship / Love Finance ; Financial need statement; SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY [3]
working as a loan officer and being in need of financial support(I think 'support' would be a better word than 'needs')
It should be ' working in a bank'
Hey, great essay by the way! All the best.
Loving Finance and working as a loan officer and be in need of financial needs is the contradiction of my life
working as a loan officer and being in need of financial support(I think 'support' would be a better word than 'needs')
working in the bank
It should be ' working in a bank'
Hey, great essay by the way! All the best.
