toeflrater
Feb 1, 2013
Writing Feedback / Memoir of the Chevalier ; Writing Section of the Toefl, Question 1 [7]
Hello. I am a former ETS TOEFL exam rater with 4 years of experience. My comments are intended to assist by providing an accurate assessment, however others have already provided more definitive comments. In short, you'll get a 3 out of 5 on this essay, but you are close to a 4. Be careful at the end...there are many more significant grammar and usage issues at the end than at the beginning. Advice: Try to forget about the grammar structure your local teachers have taught you...write more like what you have seen over the years by native English authors, and work out the grammar correctly in your head as you write the words. Good luck!
Hello. I am a former ETS TOEFL exam rater with 4 years of experience. My comments are intended to assist by providing an accurate assessment, however others have already provided more definitive comments. In short, you'll get a 3 out of 5 on this essay, but you are close to a 4. Be careful at the end...there are many more significant grammar and usage issues at the end than at the beginning. Advice: Try to forget about the grammar structure your local teachers have taught you...write more like what you have seen over the years by native English authors, and work out the grammar correctly in your head as you write the words. Good luck!
