Posts by Zeisha
Joined: Feb 11, 2013 |
Last Post: Feb 11, 2013
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Undergraduate /
My best friend, The person who has inspired your life the most [3]
There are many people who we come across in our day-to-day lives.Yet we fail to understand that each person comes, only to leave an impact on our lives.One such person is my Best Friend. Yes she is the one who has taught me the very important and worthwhile things in Life. She has taught me so many things that I can compile a book based on it.
She has taught me that life only gives us one chance and we need to make good use of it.She has also taught me to pray and is my angel and I Love her.
Writing Feedback /
AGE OF GETTING MARRIED ; NEGATIVE & POSITIVE ASPECTS [3]
Hello!...you write very well!...but just one suggestion...in most of thee places instead of the word "married", you have used the word "marriage"...sothat causes a little hindrance to the fluencyof your language.You have very strong points against marriage which is a very good thing...Keep up the good work..n hope you don't take my suggestion in the wrong meaning..Regards!
Poetry /
What If Tomorrow Never Comes; Feed back on Poem [4]
hi, im really glad that we still have some 'Shakesqeares' n 'Wordsworths' with us!..:-)..First let me compliment you on your beauthjful writing skills...Have you heard of a 'Haiku'?..Its a type of poem in which you describe your feelings with the help of seasons...and that's exactly what you've done!..:-) n its marvellous!:-) Your in the right direction..just keep working ahead.:-)
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IELTS Task2 ; "that all students should learn a foreign language" [4]
hey this is my essay about the foreign language debate-
Many a time, we are faced with an embarrasing situation in which we cannot converse with an individual of a different foreign origin, due to language barriers. It is clear that, therefore everyone needs to learn atleast one other different language apart from one's mother tongue. While on vacation to a new country, it is essential that we know it's native language. Hence, everyone should take up as a challenge, the art of learning a foreign lan
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