Dawnh
Feb 17, 2013
Writing Feedback / Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. [6]
I think that you should not only talk about how it affects you in bad ways but also include how it beneficial it is to other and the environment. For example autistic children, they are able to use those devices to read with out tearing them the can zoom in or out, practice writing the same world right next to it and etc. and think about the trees that were saving. Now all libraries will shut down but with technology it saves money since a library doesn't have to have 20 of the same books that cost with discount around $20 while they can 10 for a price of under $10 with worrying about someone not returning the book and not also paying the fee but with internet it automatically deletes after curtain number of days. I hopes this helps. I don't want to seem judgmental just wanted you too see the positive. And i do agree with you in most cases.
I think that you should not only talk about how it affects you in bad ways but also include how it beneficial it is to other and the environment. For example autistic children, they are able to use those devices to read with out tearing them the can zoom in or out, practice writing the same world right next to it and etc. and think about the trees that were saving. Now all libraries will shut down but with technology it saves money since a library doesn't have to have 20 of the same books that cost with discount around $20 while they can 10 for a price of under $10 with worrying about someone not returning the book and not also paying the fee but with internet it automatically deletes after curtain number of days. I hopes this helps. I don't want to seem judgmental just wanted you too see the positive. And i do agree with you in most cases.
