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Feb 23, 2013
Writing Feedback / A school is where people learn and study; ESSAY ON "MY SCHOOL" [3]

Without school we will never able write even a word.

Without school, we will never be able to write even a word.

Every classes have about 40 students.

Every class has about 40 students.

All of the building's wall has a beautiful mural drew by students.

All of the building's walls have beautiful murals drawn by students.

Furthermore, the school have one hectare field, so there will always pupils playing football during the sport period and after the school ended.

Furthermore, the school has one hectare field, so there are always pupils playing football during sport period and after school.

My school has 3 basketball court, two of the football court is indoor, while the other one is outdoor, therefore we can play basketball even though it was a sunny day or raining day.

My school has three basketball courts, two indoor, and one outdoor so that we can play regardless of the weather.

This make our school became famous.

This has made our school become famous.

Beside that, the school have a science lab for students to, make experiments, library, canten and 6 outdoor badminton court.

Besides that, the school has a science lab for students to conduct experiments, a library, a canteen and six outdoor badminton courts.

All teacher are highly trained and experience.

All teachers are highly trained and experienced.

learned women.

learned woman

We must gave a card to the librarian in order to lend books, and return them after on week time.

We must give a card to the librarian in order to lend books, and return them after one week's time.

canteen sell may different types of food.

sells many

In studies, our school show good result every year.

In studies, our school gets good results year after year.

This school attract people from distant to study here is because the facilities are complete and the discipline here are very strict. It is a ideal school in every state.

This school attracts people from afar to study here because the facilities are complete and discipline is very strict. It is an ideal school in every state.

Hope this helps =]
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