Undergraduate / Piercing my nose and my fighting against my family's opinions; UNPOPULAR Opinion [8]

This is really strong, and I'm not just saying that because I went through a very similar situation with my nose ring! It is very easy for anyone to identify with, because most teenagers act on a similar impulse like this. Whether it is a tattoo, piercing, or simply the clothes we wear, we don't want to care what our parents think; but of course we grudgingly do.

The essay is well written, though it is casual and rather informal. If this is the objective, then bravo, it works well.