Huiyoke
Mar 12, 2013
Scholarship / I can face all the challenges in life ; NTU Scholarship- My values and beliefs [6]
This is my new essay. Please help me to correct it. Thank you. =)
I believe that self confidence can definitely make a difference in one self. Since I entered junior high school, my self confidence has given me so much courage to explore new things and meet new friends by joining many different activities not only in the school but also outside the school. I enjoy hosting events, joining competition and giving out lessons in the public, because all these activities give me opportunities to meet new people from different ages and backgrounds, and I learn to adapt to new environments and get along with new friends easily. My self confidence complements my ability to adapt to varying situations, making me well-prepared for all the challenges I faced. That is the main reason why I choose to study Actuarial Science, because I am confident in doing something which requires a quick response towards the changes in the world.
I believe that leadership is the crucial part in any organisation. I was fortunate enough to be given opportunities to organise various events and societies when I was in junior high school. I have learnt that being a leader is not just about leading people, giving out clear instructions to get things done, but it also involves looking after the members while leading them towards a common goal, identifying their strengths and weaknesses so that tasks can be given to the right person and that the tasks can be done effectively. A leader must also be humble to hear opinions and suggestions from the members which can make the organisation better. Therefore, leadership is definitely a value that I hold on to make a change in my life.
With the values I hold strongly to, I am confident that I can excel in my future and achieve my career aspirations.
This is my new essay. Please help me to correct it. Thank you. =)
I believe that self confidence can definitely make a difference in one self. Since I entered junior high school, my self confidence has given me so much courage to explore new things and meet new friends by joining many different activities not only in the school but also outside the school. I enjoy hosting events, joining competition and giving out lessons in the public, because all these activities give me opportunities to meet new people from different ages and backgrounds, and I learn to adapt to new environments and get along with new friends easily. My self confidence complements my ability to adapt to varying situations, making me well-prepared for all the challenges I faced. That is the main reason why I choose to study Actuarial Science, because I am confident in doing something which requires a quick response towards the changes in the world.
I believe that leadership is the crucial part in any organisation. I was fortunate enough to be given opportunities to organise various events and societies when I was in junior high school. I have learnt that being a leader is not just about leading people, giving out clear instructions to get things done, but it also involves looking after the members while leading them towards a common goal, identifying their strengths and weaknesses so that tasks can be given to the right person and that the tasks can be done effectively. A leader must also be humble to hear opinions and suggestions from the members which can make the organisation better. Therefore, leadership is definitely a value that I hold on to make a change in my life.
With the values I hold strongly to, I am confident that I can excel in my future and achieve my career aspirations.