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Apr 1, 2013
Writing Feedback / Who enjoy life more? Young or Old? [6]

Hi everyone, Can someone help me take a look at it and give your feedback.Thanks a lot !!

Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
h_paniz   
Apr 1, 2013
Writing Feedback / Who enjoy life more? Young or Old? [6]

I am not agree up to point with the idea that young people enjoy life more than older people do, in my view both of two groups have specific exceptions and entertainment in your ages.

but I think this idea that younger get more enjoyment than older in their life is wrong either, therefore in following paragraphs I point out some of my reasons that proves this impression.

Generally, in my idea everyone in her/his age enjoys life, when I was child I played and really happy, those days life meant playing and enjoying for myself and nothing at all. when I little grew up and I made friends have had some friends, life was for me full of colors, it was continue in my teen aging, in my young and until now that I am between young and middle age; because of this consequence, I think every stage of live have especial and particular own qualities.

As I said at above, considering that qualities, the expectations of life between young and old people are so different and we cannot compare that to each other. but I want answer to this question" young people enjoy life more than older people do", so I prefer choose older people as who more enjoy of life rather than younger.

this part I want express some illustrations to support of my opinion; first, older people are full of experiences and know what they want to be satisfy; most of them have family, children and grandchildren, and enjoy of being with them.

second, usually, older people go to sightseeing and visiting ancient and touristy places, they spend a lot of time in trip and become familiar with different nations. they have more leisure time for reading favorite books and magazine and watching desired films and they spend a lot of time in park and garden.

while young people work hardly and in his\her spare time prefer to have a rest and being relax and sometimes go to club and disco to be free; by this comparison , I choose older people as who have more enjoy in her/his life.
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