Writing Feedback / Is there a BEST AGE to marry? ; TOEFL IBT [2]

What is the best age to marry? Give reasons and examples to support your response.

All of us look for joy and stability. Marriage seems for us the best way to fulfill our desires... However, if marriage pleased us in that effective way, at what age should we marry? My personal opinion based upon my surroundings is that even though the decision of marrying can bring happiness, it has not to be taken before the age of thirty.

First of all, the most important reason that prevents people to marry before the age of thirty is an economic reason; indeed, when a couple of persons decide to marry, they have to be ready economically, in equal meaning they should have their own home and car, and for sure a sum of money which is enough to ensure their daily needs; thus it is more advised to marry at the age of thirty after being economically ready...

Then, in addition to the economic reason, there is a psychological reason. Marriage is a serious step made by two mature persons who have had well explored both the life and the love, and are ready to devote their lives for each other and for their children. Therefore, marriage necessitates a high degree of maturity that only a person aged 30 can have... For instance, many marriages taken earlier than 30 years old end with getting divorced...

In conclusion, I think the best age to marry is 30 years old for two reasons: economic and psychological reason... Finally, even though marriage is a really important decision which has to be organized, it is not advised to take a lot of time planning for it...

I need to know what score over thirty ( /30 ) I deserve for this essay... and thanks in advance...

Writing Feedback / Most difficult aspects of learning a new language ; TOEFL ibt [7]

It can be quite difficult to learn a new language. What do you think are the most difficult aspects of learning a new language? Give reasons and examples to support your response.

Hello, I would like to know if my essay below is adequate to get a good score on the writing section of the toefl ibt test ( the score required is 20/30)... Thank you in advance :D:D

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Everybody feels curious to discover new cultures and traditions of other countries; therefore he resorts to learn a new language in order to achieve these desires.

Thereby learning a new language led to meet new cultures and people, but even though it seems really interesting it has many difficult aspects.

First of all, learning a new language requires the adaptability with the new rules found in that language and that are not found in the mother language; indeed every language has its own grammar rules that differ to the grammar rules of another language. For example, the French grammar rules differ from the English grammar rules, especially the agreement between the noun and the adjective: when we use a plural noun in French the adjective should be in the plural form by taking an "s" which is not required in English language where a plural noun needs a singular adjective such as "rectangular shapes, red flowers..."

The second difficult aspect of learning a new language is that learning a foreign language necessitates active using of it. People who acquire a new language should practice what they learn; therefore learning a new language in a place where it is not spoken requires hard efforts and study...

For example, a learner of English language cannot prove his skills in English unless if he travels to a company where people speak English which is not always accessible by the learners.

In conclusion, learning a new language is an interesting and profitable thing, but it is also quite difficult because it demands hard efforts... Finally I would like to ask how much the French quote "vouloir c'est pouvoir", which means if anyone is eager to do something he can certainly do it, can be applicable in learning a new language...