Dhan
May 11, 2013
Writing Feedback / TOEFL; The 21st century has begun.What change do you think? [2]
Topic Name:- The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.
answer,
In my point of view, everything changes in 21st century. You should go to other country in just few hours. Peoples use laptop, tablet and Smartphone as their needs. We can make new foreigner friend by using internet. Women cook food in just few minutes because they use more machines for cooking. There are many reasons that convince me, you can take care of your kid's by using mobile or smart phones. For example, now a day's students go to their college or school, their parents don't taking care about their safety because parent brought Smartphone for their daughter or kids. Kids attend their extra classes, parents anytime called them for asking about their safety.
Second reason is, you can use your laptop for finding new college or school for your kids. For example, my husband looking best school for my kids. My husband asked their friend but no one give him good suggestion. My husband finding school by using internet, he found school on web site and he is read review. That times my husband ready to admit my kids in this school. I am very happy because without any help we found best school for my kids.
Third reason, you can make more new dishes for your family. For example, last week I arrange party for my friend or relative. I cook more dishes in just few minutes because I use more electronic machines like, oven, microwave and grinder and I like to use those entire things. I cooked cookie or pizza and so on in just few hours. These were very new for my relative.
The 21st century is very fast because we can learn more things in this century. People take more advantages in their life. Technology brings more advance machines for human. We can learn more about our interested by using television, internet, news paper and magazine.
Topic Name:- The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.
answer,
In my point of view, everything changes in 21st century. You should go to other country in just few hours. Peoples use laptop, tablet and Smartphone as their needs. We can make new foreigner friend by using internet. Women cook food in just few minutes because they use more machines for cooking. There are many reasons that convince me, you can take care of your kid's by using mobile or smart phones. For example, now a day's students go to their college or school, their parents don't taking care about their safety because parent brought Smartphone for their daughter or kids. Kids attend their extra classes, parents anytime called them for asking about their safety.
Second reason is, you can use your laptop for finding new college or school for your kids. For example, my husband looking best school for my kids. My husband asked their friend but no one give him good suggestion. My husband finding school by using internet, he found school on web site and he is read review. That times my husband ready to admit my kids in this school. I am very happy because without any help we found best school for my kids.
Third reason, you can make more new dishes for your family. For example, last week I arrange party for my friend or relative. I cook more dishes in just few minutes because I use more electronic machines like, oven, microwave and grinder and I like to use those entire things. I cooked cookie or pizza and so on in just few hours. These were very new for my relative.
The 21st century is very fast because we can learn more things in this century. People take more advantages in their life. Technology brings more advance machines for human. We can learn more about our interested by using television, internet, news paper and magazine.