Writing Feedback / TOEFL; The 21st century has begun.What change do you think? [2]

Topic Name:- The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

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In my point of view, everything changes in 21st century. You should go to other country in just few hours. Peoples use laptop, tablet and Smartphone as their needs. We can make new foreigner friend by using internet. Women cook food in just few minutes because they use more machines for cooking. There are many reasons that convince me, you can take care of your kid's by using mobile or smart phones. For example, now a day's students go to their college or school, their parents don't taking care about their safety because parent brought Smartphone for their daughter or kids. Kids attend their extra classes, parents anytime called them for asking about their safety.

Second reason is, you can use your laptop for finding new college or school for your kids. For example, my husband looking best school for my kids. My husband asked their friend but no one give him good suggestion. My husband finding school by using internet, he found school on web site and he is read review. That times my husband ready to admit my kids in this school. I am very happy because without any help we found best school for my kids.

Third reason, you can make more new dishes for your family. For example, last week I arrange party for my friend or relative. I cook more dishes in just few minutes because I use more electronic machines like, oven, microwave and grinder and I like to use those entire things. I cooked cookie or pizza and so on in just few hours. These were very new for my relative.

The 21st century is very fast because we can learn more things in this century. People take more advantages in their life. Technology brings more advance machines for human. We can learn more about our interested by using television, internet, news paper and magazine.

Writing Feedback / How Television impact communication among friends and family? [2]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Although, there are many advantages of television, but I agree with this statement. Mostly time Television destroyed communication. Family member watch television programs. Furthermore, kids also whole day watch cartoon. Many reasons convince that, guest is come to our house, kids play cartoon. This is so bad habit. For example, last week I invited my friends at my home for dinner, my kids play cartoon, I didn't say anything. But little by little he was increase the volume. Me and my friends feel so disturb but my kids can't hear our instruction. My friends told me, your baby is not discipline. I didn't like my babies behavior.

Second reason is, some people arrange party on their house and they can't speak with their guest or relatives. They just play television, everyone watch television in this party. This type of partys is so boring. For example, my relative recent moves in my city, they arrange pizza party on their house, they called me to help their party. Everyone came their house, eat pizza and watch television. I don't like this party.

Third reason is, we live with our family, we can't do study. For example, my sister is doing study. She go to college in the morning but she like to re-read her topic. My family member can't miss tournament matches, whole day they watch their favorite tournament match with each others. They increase television volume and them also discuses loudly with each. this is so distortable for my sister. But she tries to learn her topic.

Nowadays, people support television show but they don't know they lost their important time. Some people doing important work but others not taking care and watch television. People thing television show, program is not important in their life.