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Men vs women are not equally suited for many tasks


maheshbabu 1 / -  
May 8, 2013   #1

Men vs Women talents



Men and Women are equally suited for many tasks .their inherent physical differences makes them different from each other and makes us to think that women are suitable to less tasks while Men to many tasks.

In ancient days women are confined to household tasks .As men believed that Women cannot do any tasks except household. In stone age men used to do hazardous tasks such as hunting dangerous animals and Women used to hunt small animals.In medieval period Women started doing other tasks otherthan household tasks.

modern age witnessed a dramatic change in women doing more tasks than men .Women such as Indhiragandhi,Kalpanachawla,and kiranbedi achieved sucess and fame in their repective fields .Today women are competing with men in various fields and giving challenges to men.

In modern age Men also taking part of household tasks such as cooking,baby care etc when their wifes are on work.Skill is important attribute in today's world and is deciding factor of doing tasks. some people have skills to do multiple tasks at a time.Men with cooking skills have becoming chefs in most reputed hotels.Some persons with more skills such as

To sum up Men and Women are equally suited for many tasks .Skill is only important to judge a person whether he/she suits for many tasks or not but not gender discrimination

Dhan 2 / 2  
May 11, 2013   #2
your essay is very well but you didn't take stand in essay. suppose your agree with this statement you should write all support point, or you disagree with this statement you should write opposite point in this essay. your essay is completely mix. please summarize main point and give at least one example.
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
May 15, 2013   #3
their inherent physical differences makesmake them different from each other and makesmake us to think that women are suitable to less tasks while Men to many tasks.

... Please make sure that you start sentences with capital letters when you make posts to this forum as it is very inconvenient for others to read when the essays are not presented in a tidy manner. Also, the latter part is not expressed well.

difference makes/ differences make
Their inherent physical capabilities make them different from each other in performing tasks. This make most of us to feel that women are a weaker sex and not as capable as men in handling many tasks.

As men believed that Women cannot do any tasks except household.

This led men to believe that women are only good at household chores.
shaddy 17 / 47 7  
May 15, 2013   #4
Men and Women are equally suited for many tasks .tT heir inherent physical differences makes them different from each other and makes us to think that women are suitable to less tasks while Men to many tasks.

Men are also taking part of household tasks such as cooking,baby care etc

I liked the essay, they are good points.


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