duchuy1809
Jun 13, 2013
Writing Feedback / University education is necessary for success in today's world. Agree or disagree? [6]
your introductory should be longer and more informative
your introductory should be longer and more informative
duchuy1809
Jun 13, 2013
Writing Feedback / IMPACT OF VIOLENT MOVIES ON CHILDREN: introduction [4]
your introductory should be longer and more informative
your introductory should be longer and more informative
duchuy1809
Jun 1, 2013
Writing Feedback / How violent movies impact on young children? [3]
Topic:Do you agree or disagree with the statement: violent movies have negative impacts on young children?
Watching TV is good or bad?
Nowadays, watching TV is a popular mean of entertainment for people including children. There' re various kinds of movies on Tv but children show more interest in violent movies for certain reasons, such as fantastic action scenes or amazing sound effects. However, these movies might have a bad influence on viewers, especially kids. So, I strongly believe that violent movies should be censored due to these following reasons:
First, it wastes lots of time. Because of its amazing affects, violent movies attract plenty of viewers including children. They focus on watching these movies and neglect their school work. Morever, kids are easily to be addited and won't have much time to take care another stuffs such as: eating, sleeping or playing with their parents.
In terms of education, violent movies won't bring back any benefits. Children should learn useful knowledge such as: biology, math or science..., but what they can learn from these kinds of vies are: crime, murder, war...Indeed, these stuffs are suitable for adults only.
Another disadvantage of violent movies is that it will affect children's behavior developement. Because they' re in stage of learning new things so they often imitate what they see on movies. As a result they tend to use violence to solve problems.
Topic:Do you agree or disagree with the statement: violent movies have negative impacts on young children?
Watching TV is good or bad?
Nowadays, watching TV is a popular mean of entertainment for people including children. There' re various kinds of movies on Tv but children show more interest in violent movies for certain reasons, such as fantastic action scenes or amazing sound effects. However, these movies might have a bad influence on viewers, especially kids. So, I strongly believe that violent movies should be censored due to these following reasons:
First, it wastes lots of time. Because of its amazing affects, violent movies attract plenty of viewers including children. They focus on watching these movies and neglect their school work. Morever, kids are easily to be addited and won't have much time to take care another stuffs such as: eating, sleeping or playing with their parents.
In terms of education, violent movies won't bring back any benefits. Children should learn useful knowledge such as: biology, math or science..., but what they can learn from these kinds of vies are: crime, murder, war...Indeed, these stuffs are suitable for adults only.
Another disadvantage of violent movies is that it will affect children's behavior developement. Because they' re in stage of learning new things so they often imitate what they see on movies. As a result they tend to use violence to solve problems.
