davylsc910
Jun 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / Learning English through Social Issue - Teen Smoking [3]
Sorry, Can you help to correct,please ? I think it have much of mistakes.
Nowadays, it is not common for smoking in Hong Kong. Undoubtedly, there are many demerits for this phenomenon. It is a popular trend among to smoking. School children as young as eight smoking and almost all secondary schools have student smoker. Hence, it is virtually rewarding to rethink the cons of smoking. In the article, we are going to explore the caused, the cons and the solutions. Let's look at the reasons behind the serious trend of smoking. [..]
Sorry, Can you help to correct,please ? I think it have much of mistakes.
Nowadays, it is not common for smoking in Hong Kong. Undoubtedly, there are many demerits for this phenomenon. It is a popular trend among to smoking. School children as young as eight smoking and almost all secondary schools have student smoker. Hence, it is virtually rewarding to rethink the cons of smoking. In the article, we are going to explore the caused, the cons and the solutions. Let's look at the reasons behind the serious trend of smoking. [..]
