Poetry / Venus and Adonis poem, common characteristics? [3]

Thank you so much for your help as well as correcting my grammar still learning

Essays / Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges? [16]

ok im stuck im trying to follow what professor said about having everything follow one behind the other..this is some what of revising the bold is where im lost at..oh yea and that first bold sentence my professor said isnt true..i know its true for me thou

Today most adults and high school graduates are furthering their education. Doing this in hopes of receiving a degree, in which they can apply to a career. Many have set goals on where they wanted their life to go. Consequently, this is not an easy task most are facing financial burdens. With today's economy, most families are in debt and some have fallen behind on household bills, credit card payment as well as rent. With the high cost of living, many of them are making sacrifices. Families are now cutting back on their spending habits such, as not dining out, taking vacations, buying the latest trends whether it is the newest technology or a brand new outfit. Some are even, borrowing from themselves for they are taking from their rent, and savings. These families are doing this so they would be able to pay for their child's tuition fees, if not for themselves as well. Some may not qualified for financial aide and most likely would take a student loan, if not borrow from family or friends. With textbooks supplied to students, they would have the relief of not worrying about how they would pay for it.

Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

the more i explore this site the more i see the different terms of writing had to go and look up what is a zine

Student Talk / Word count limits and restrictions in essays [44]

glad someone ask this . im always worrying that its to short or just to much

Essays / Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges? [16]

once again im asking for help...and thanks again for all the input..i recieved my paper back...of course first sentence was too abrupt..my professor wrote for the intro i need to qualify logic and that it needs to be tweaked..any input on this..im so lost and confused...this is a remedial course..and of course she wrote logical position statement...i have been out of school nearly 20+years what i thought was so easy really isn't

Essays / Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges? [16]

i wrote something up its not perfect but its a start instead of a blank screen or paper,really just so i wouldnt be so frustrated and i could stop filling the cuss jar and thank you all for your input

Yes, colleges should supply students with textbooks. This would relieve some of the financial burdens that students and their family would face. Many families are in debt and some have fallen behind on household bills, credit card payment as well as rent. With the high cost of living, many of them are making sacrifices. Such as not dining out, taking vacations, buying the latest trends whether it is the newest technology or a brand new outfit even taken from the rent. These families are doing this so they would be able to pay for their child's tuition fees, if not for themselves as well. Some may not qualified for financial aide and most likely would take a student loan, if not borrow from family or friends. With textbooks supplied to students, they would have the relief of not worrying about how they would pay for it.

If colleges did this students will not have to worry about books being out of stock; furthermore, they would not worry if they purchased the wrong book. With the books, they will be prepared for class assignment also, is able to complete homework on time. These students will be able to keep up with the class and study for future exams. With this said, student would have saved some money for the fact textbook are outrageously expensive. Students would now have the extra money to choose another class maybe even put it to their next term.

Essays / Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges? [16]

thanks again still working on it im sure i'll get there...i do like that line Mustafa

Essays / Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges? [16]

Suggestion on my first line please..it is not perfect i know it may need a little tweaking.
First Line~> Today many students face obstacles especially when it comes to their education.

this is how i want to start my essay before i jump into my prompt thanks in advance for any response

Essays / Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges? [16]

I want to say thank you all for your help..I just did some free writing..now just to put everything in order..still didnt come up with a catchy first line and i really dont want to start off with the question..and the essay is just about text book being free and not the college because we all know thats unrealistic for the fact college is run like a business..sorry this is remedial english i am doing..and i just find it all frustrating after being out of school for nearly 20 years its just hard to reprogram yourself being taught one way now to learn another

Essays / Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges? [16]

Sorry that i wasn't clear enough.
The prompt is "Should college adhere to the same policy as high school and give students the text book for free?"
This is for English class and she wants us to answer yes and why.
I need to write a introduction and body paragraph.