violetkau1
Jun 17, 2013
Writing Feedback / parents are the first people who show the children what they should or shouldnt [7]
can you take a glance at my cecond paragraph. thank you
can you take a glance at my cecond paragraph. thank you
violetkau1
Jun 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / technology impact - we should keep the knowledge of traditional skills alive [3]
your second paragraph should be should be equally long as the first. and it wiull be better if you start witt firstly,... you can say that by keeping traditional skills alive we provide emplointment in region where there is no other industry. , eg: furniture , pottery, rose-flower... and also that traditional skills make us unique as a nation..
That's my opinion. hope i helped
your second paragraph should be should be equally long as the first. and it wiull be better if you start witt firstly,... you can say that by keeping traditional skills alive we provide emplointment in region where there is no other industry. , eg: furniture , pottery, rose-flower... and also that traditional skills make us unique as a nation..
That's my opinion. hope i helped
violetkau1
Jun 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / parents are the first people who show the children what they should or shouldnt [7]
Topic: Some pople think that parents should teach children how to be good members of sociaety .Others, however, belive that school is the place to learn this.
Children spend most of their time at school and in their homes , where not only do they study for certain subjects but also they learn to be cizvilizied and good people .That's why i think that both teachers and parents have a great impact on children's attitude in sociaety.
To begin with, parents are the first people who show the children what they should or shouldnt say or do .They teach the children to obey some rules from their early ages as every parent's aim is to make his/her child a good member of society..Parents also influence the children with their own manners.Many times children repeat some words said by someone of their family or behave like him or her.Therefore,parents have an very important role in children's upbringing and they should be more responsible for making them a human beings with positive qualities.
On the other hand , school is the place, where children are obligated to go to and where they should obey certain rules.Except that they gain knowledge of history, biology and many other subjects , because of the school children gain many other quaities.For example, waking up early in the morning and going to school at exact hour make them more precise and doing homeworks change them to people with responsibilities.School is also the place where they learn to communicate with different personalities and due to this they become sociable.However, all this things wont be possible without the help of the teachers, who should be strict and should require more and more from their students.While they educate them they also have the task to teach them how to be a good people because in my view school is the second family of the child.
In conclusion, parents and school are equally responsible to teach children to be a good mamber of sociaety....
i dont know how to end up, pl
Topic: Some pople think that parents should teach children how to be good members of sociaety .Others, however, belive that school is the place to learn this.
Children spend most of their time at school and in their homes , where not only do they study for certain subjects but also they learn to be cizvilizied and good people .That's why i think that both teachers and parents have a great impact on children's attitude in sociaety.
To begin with, parents are the first people who show the children what they should or shouldnt say or do .They teach the children to obey some rules from their early ages as every parent's aim is to make his/her child a good member of society..Parents also influence the children with their own manners.Many times children repeat some words said by someone of their family or behave like him or her.Therefore,parents have an very important role in children's upbringing and they should be more responsible for making them a human beings with positive qualities.
On the other hand , school is the place, where children are obligated to go to and where they should obey certain rules.Except that they gain knowledge of history, biology and many other subjects , because of the school children gain many other quaities.For example, waking up early in the morning and going to school at exact hour make them more precise and doing homeworks change them to people with responsibilities.School is also the place where they learn to communicate with different personalities and due to this they become sociable.However, all this things wont be possible without the help of the teachers, who should be strict and should require more and more from their students.While they educate them they also have the task to teach them how to be a good people because in my view school is the second family of the child.
In conclusion, parents and school are equally responsible to teach children to be a good mamber of sociaety....
i dont know how to end up, pl
violetkau1
Jun 16, 2013
Dissertations / Need to decide topic of dissertation Mtech Computer Science [11]
You have to have some kind of interest! What is your interest? If you are going to get this advanced degree, it should be because you have a particular interest.
Here is your homework:
1.) Start by writing a paragraph about some philosopher whose work you admire.
2.) Read 3 recent masters thesis papers by people who have earned philosophy degrees. You will see that they found a way to contribute a NEW idea based on EXISTING ideas.
:-)
If you really just want examples of thesis statements, you can google this: philosophy, "thesis paper", examples, list.
You have to have some kind of interest! What is your interest? If you are going to get this advanced degree, it should be because you have a particular interest.
Here is your homework:
1.) Start by writing a paragraph about some philosopher whose work you admire.
2.) Read 3 recent masters thesis papers by people who have earned philosophy degrees. You will see that they found a way to contribute a NEW idea based on EXISTING ideas.
:-)
If you really just want examples of thesis statements, you can google this: philosophy, "thesis paper", examples, list.
violetkau1
Jun 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / Frederick II: Astonishment of the World or Blasphemous Beast of the Apocalypse? [3]
where are you pareparing it for?
where are you pareparing it for?
violetkau1
Jun 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / Technology Vs Traditional skills and Way of life [4]
thank you, yes i;m preparing for Ielts exam
thank you, yes i;m preparing for Ielts exam
violetkau1
Jun 10, 2013
Writing Feedback / Technology Vs Traditional skills and Way of life [4]
Ielts essay-When a country devolps its technology the traditional skill and the ways
I dont know what to be my thesis sentences. Could you help me?
i begin with:
one of the every governments aim is to develop the technology of its country so as to make life easier for its citizens.
Ielts essay-When a country devolps its technology the traditional skill and the ways
I dont know what to be my thesis sentences. Could you help me?
i begin with:
one of the every governments aim is to develop the technology of its country so as to make life easier for its citizens.