Letters / Referral for a scholarship applicant [2]

I am asked to write referee report for scholarship apllicant, i ma worried my english, so please give me a correction for my writing also ideas .

What areas can you identify that the applicant would benefit from further development, in order to successfully complete their program?

He has excellent communication and leadership skills. However, in order to fulfil his qualification to complete his proposed study, Community Service Work course, he would develop more skills, in particularity solving problem skills and academic knowledge from lectures.

His work experience community development projects from our company are not diverse enough to respond to solving problem skills development. Currently, the trend of working requires skills to deal with diversity of issues, because, sometimes, the issues are complicated. However, this course is international program where students will come from different places around the world, the exchange of experience and ideas with classmates and lecturers will be shared in the program both inside and outside the class. Therefore, this will provide him to see variety of issues solutions. As a result, he will gain comprehensive experience, perspective of lessons learnt and it leads to improvement of his solving problem skills.

Another important knowledge needs to be developed for him is an academic background from university. He has already strong working experience which he has mainly gained from practical work. This experience allows him to see the real situation of the world in community service work area. However, a shortage of academic background from this development field is challenging for him when he takes responsible for work with international organisations. I think, therefore; Community Service Work course that he proposed to study will fill the gap between theories lessons and work experience, because this program will provide him theories from seminars or lectures from qualified lecturers. Therefore, the knowledge from the university combined with his work experience will help him to well smoothly complete this study program.

I am confident that improvement of two areas, problem solving skills and academic knowledge, will support him to complete this program.

Letters / Applicant suitability & Benefit of propose program/ Reference letter [2]

I am writing this on behalf of referee for applicant. I am current employer of applicant. Please give feedback on ideas and grammar.
I evaluate this applicant that he has excellent leadership and communication skills.
Questions:
The applicant's suitability to undertake the proposed program at the nominated institution/organisation; and
The benefits of the proposed Program for the applicant's home and host country

I have known this person almost two years. He is very active staff. I am very proud of his excellent leadership skills and communication skills. I am very confident when the projects in the company are under his supervision. His both ills are a part of our success of our projects. His communication skills allow the projects run smoothly with local communities and governmental sector. Furthermore, his leadership skills assist him to control and supervise many staff in the team to run project successfully both inside and outside the office. Community Service Work that he proposes to study will be suitable for him because ability to communicate would help him to learn with diverse culture smoothly.

I think this field of study will be very useful for the country like XXX country, because the large population relies on the development projects or programs. One skilled person would benefits fro a large number of target populations. However, finding people with an academic background from this study field is difficult; mainly people who works on development program or projects are from outside of the field. They gain skills from experience. Therefore, with this study program, it would produce skilled staff for the nation. Furthermore, these skilled people could create number of staff capacity building program.

On the other hand, this study program would also benefit for the host country, Australia. Firstly, it will increase higher profile of Australian education via productive work from educated people from the country. Secondly, Australia is a one of the main donors conducting several programs or projects in XXX country. Australian organisations would benefit from this program in terms of qualified local employees seeking and they would assist theses organisations run projects more effectively.