Posts by smudla95

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Jun 20, 2013

Writing Feedback / IELTS: Many people are busy with work and not enough time for famliy [4]

In this modern society, many people are busying with[ /s] busy in the work, they need to work over 10 hours each (per) day, even need to back to work on the weekend.

you will find the windows of these companies always are lighting. you see that the windows are always lighting.

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Jun 12, 2013

Writing Feedback / Europe, America and Asia; The holiday of a lifetime [2]

Hi, can I request about correcting my essay?

The holiday of a liftetime
Last year I had a big chance to travel around the world with my friend as a honeymoon. The way took a hundred days, we tried every means of transport, saw a lot of different countries in Europa, America and Asia.

The worst experince that I have from the way was in Cuba.The political regime is really strict. I was shocked but I can a bit help to people, which live here. We gave them money and some food. On the other hand nature was beautiful. So clean and unspoiled from people.

When I was younger I wanted to go to Maldives always. Even though I can relaxed and live in a hotel. I didn't forget memories from Cuba, they were memorably.

The hundredth day I can turn back and realise that I helped to people, get to know new countries and their culture. It was a holiday I will never forget.

Thank you :-)