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sukjay   
Mar 28, 2009
Writing Feedback / If you can interview any living person, who would it be and why? [6]

Rich Monte)

I appreciated your points !
I realized how important to distinguish the truth through television or any other sources.
propaganda was used for many reasons especially for enforcing power during the WW2.
Television is currently one of the tools that is using for politicians' propaganda.
Thanks for you comments again :D

EF_Sean)

Thanks !! I'm so happy that you praised me, even if I got so poor writing skill...
I think I need to resplit the points through the order.
Yeah, I know I can't see any definite and clear point .!
And, I should fix some grammar errors.
Thanks so much ! :D
sukjay   
Mar 26, 2009
Writing Feedback / If you can interview any living person, who would it be and why? [6]

If you can interview any living person, who would it be and why? What would you ask that person? (250 words limit)

A few months ago, I watched documentary film about serious famine of North Korea. I was depressed on one side because of little skeleton-like children who didn't have enough nutrients so that were crying. On the other hand, I was really angry and frustrated because the government was only focusing on developing new weapons by spending almost whole money. If the political infrastructure is destroyed by certain leadership, that country walks to the backward. I would like to interview with Kim Jung- Il, the Chairman of the National Defense Commission of North Korea who is standing at the core of nuclear problem. I want to inquire about real meaning of peace and where it comes from. To split into three sections of interview,

First, I'll ask about the nuclear situation which is very immediate agenda between the North Korea and other countries in the world. Then, I want to share opinions in terms of human dignity which is common value of whole mankind. And finally, I'd like to conclude with peaceful unification of Korean peninsula and communication with the world.

"Mr. Kim, human being is communicative existence. we cannot live without that."

Hi my name is Jay, and I am new member of this site.
I have very poor writing skill I know TT
but, I hope I can learn how to write nicely in here...
Thanks:D
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