Undergraduate / Solitude was my only companion - The Hermit ; Personal Information - U Texas [6]

Simply answer the prompt.You write though you have a few grammatical errors here and there. If you want cite your prior reclusiveness and "self-developing narcissistic attitude" as the challenge you encountered, then try and elaborate more on the special moment that helped you change.

Writing Feedback / SAT: Do changes that make life easier not necessarily make them better? [8]

I don't think renowned was the best adjective to use. Maybe notorious would have been better.And try varying you sentence structure cos all your sentences are too similar. Finally get a stronger conclusion