Writing Feedback / Management of Planning - Arthur Anderson (Enron case) [4]

it's mess rightnow.
I've to write on management of Planning and company that I've picked is Arthur Anderson (Enron case)
there is whole bunch of research materials in it rightnow but only first and 2nd paragraph is written well.

Could you guys please share your thoughts/feedback and help out?
thanks

Since there is no place to attach here. I'm not sure where to post up.