Undergraduate / Why I'm a top cadidate for Einstein MC Philadelphia program - Radiologic Technology [7]

Hello guys I have been trying to get this down.
The criteria for the essay is
compose an essay of 150 words or less stating
why you are pursuing a career in Radiologic Technology and
why you are a top candidate for the Einstein Medical Center Philadelphia program.
150 is not much room to work oringaly I started out with 205 then got it down to 170
Any input would much appreciated!!!!!!

​I am pursuing a career in radiologic technology because while working at Temple University Hospital, I have had the opportunity to observe multiple radiologic procedures as well as being treated as a patient for a shoulder dislocation. I am very intrigued with how the studies reveal the anatomy and physiology of the human body. My experience showed me how radiology is an important piece of the healthcare system and a key aspect of the diagnosis and treatment of patients.

​ I am fascinated with technology and its constant evolution. I feel I am a foremost candidate for Einstein's School of Radiologic Technology because I have patience and a strong sense of empathy. I have the communication skills required to succeed in this field. I have great attention to detail for the information I receive as well as the information I need to pass on. I feel the training and skills that Einstein can provide will make me a valuable part of a modern healthcare team and allow me to grow professionally and personally