Law
Aug 12, 2013
Writing Feedback / 'Humans are bound to do mistakes' - I prefer machine made items [5]
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Law
Aug 12, 2013
Writing Feedback / 'Humans are bound to do mistakes' - I prefer machine made items [5]
Hi, I am preparing for toefl. I have my exam in the next of this month. So please check my essay and tell me whether I am prepared for toefl essay ? Thanks!
Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer? Items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
I would prefer machine made clothes or furniture than made out of hand. The industrial revolution has brought unprecedented changes in the manufacturing process. This transition included going to hand made productions to machine. So gradually, people started wearing machine made clothes and prefer to buy furniture, which is machine, made. There are number of reasons in support of my view:
First, nowadays, people prefer to buy clothes or furniture, which is less expensive. In machines, there is less use of labor and more of machine work so the labor is cheap, on the other hand, in hand made cloth there is more use of labor and it is difficult to sew, that is why it cost much. People prefer to buy things that are cheap and best. Recently, when I went to a mall and I saw a beautiful skirt with machine thread work on it and its cost was 50 dollars however the same skirt I saw in the other mall was for 80 dollars but it was hand made. So, there is lot of difference in price when buying machine made clothes or the latter.
Another reason is that machine made clothes is less time consuming. There is lot of time wastage in hand made items. Nowadays, people don't have much time to invest in sewing clothes due to their busy schedule rather they prefer ready made with the machine work. It is less time consuming. They don't take much time in making that thing than that which is made by hand. It takes a week or so to make that thing with hand while with machine that take hardly one day or two days.
Last but not the least, nowadays, people are very particular about their clothing. They prefer to wear clothes, which are in fashion. There are lot of varieties available in the market of machine made clothes or furniture. Machine made clothes or furniture look good and comfortable. I prefer to wear clothes, which are machine made, as there is no worry for the cloth to be torn.
In a nutshell, I would say that I would prefer to wear clothes, which are machine made rather hand made, as it is a saying that humans are bound to do mistakes. So, hand made clothes are much more risky than machine made clothes.
Hi, I am preparing for toefl. I have my exam in the next of this month. So please check my essay and tell me whether I am prepared for toefl essay ? Thanks!
Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer? Items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
I would prefer machine made clothes or furniture than made out of hand. The industrial revolution has brought unprecedented changes in the manufacturing process. This transition included going to hand made productions to machine. So gradually, people started wearing machine made clothes and prefer to buy furniture, which is machine, made. There are number of reasons in support of my view:
First, nowadays, people prefer to buy clothes or furniture, which is less expensive. In machines, there is less use of labor and more of machine work so the labor is cheap, on the other hand, in hand made cloth there is more use of labor and it is difficult to sew, that is why it cost much. People prefer to buy things that are cheap and best. Recently, when I went to a mall and I saw a beautiful skirt with machine thread work on it and its cost was 50 dollars however the same skirt I saw in the other mall was for 80 dollars but it was hand made. So, there is lot of difference in price when buying machine made clothes or the latter.
Another reason is that machine made clothes is less time consuming. There is lot of time wastage in hand made items. Nowadays, people don't have much time to invest in sewing clothes due to their busy schedule rather they prefer ready made with the machine work. It is less time consuming. They don't take much time in making that thing than that which is made by hand. It takes a week or so to make that thing with hand while with machine that take hardly one day or two days.
Last but not the least, nowadays, people are very particular about their clothing. They prefer to wear clothes, which are in fashion. There are lot of varieties available in the market of machine made clothes or furniture. Machine made clothes or furniture look good and comfortable. I prefer to wear clothes, which are machine made, as there is no worry for the cloth to be torn.
In a nutshell, I would say that I would prefer to wear clothes, which are machine made rather hand made, as it is a saying that humans are bound to do mistakes. So, hand made clothes are much more risky than machine made clothes.
Law
Aug 11, 2013
Writing Feedback / Think of the most interesting class you have ever taken. Why did you enjoy this class [5]
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Law
Aug 10, 2013
Writing Feedback / Think of the most interesting class you have ever taken. Why did you enjoy this class [5]
Hello, friends I have my toefl exam in the end of this month.
The most interesting class I have taken was performing art. This was my favorite class from the regular academic classes. I enjoyed in this class because I like to perform on stage. There was no pressure of teachers and work. We just had to prepare our role and present in front of the people. I felt more relaxed and the environment in our class was very friendly.
Giving performance in front of many people is a challenge for me, and I always felt excited to go for this class. When I first performed in front of people, it gave me confidence that I can speak in front of many people and in return I got appreciation. I performed in a famous play called Romeo and Juliet written by William Shakespeare. Beautiful play and I remember one quote from our play "Don't waste your love on somebody, who doesn't value it. "
Performing art gave me an opportunity to speak your inner voice with confidence. It develops your skills in many ways. There does not seem to be any barrier for the ideas one wishes to create. It gave me immense pleasure and there was no stress or worries. First we listen to the play and choose our character and then play that character. We actually feel the character.
I always enjoyed in this class but I had never missed any of lectures of my regular classes. Because I know that if I don't concentrate on my studies I will not secure good marks. So, I always maintain a balance between both the classes.
In conclusion, I would say that performing art was my most interesting class. I am happy that I attended this class. I learnt how to be patient and the most important that how to speak confidently and fearlessly as now I am in the profession where I have to speak confidently.
Hello, friends I have my toefl exam in the end of this month.
The most interesting class I have taken was performing art. This was my favorite class from the regular academic classes. I enjoyed in this class because I like to perform on stage. There was no pressure of teachers and work. We just had to prepare our role and present in front of the people. I felt more relaxed and the environment in our class was very friendly.
Giving performance in front of many people is a challenge for me, and I always felt excited to go for this class. When I first performed in front of people, it gave me confidence that I can speak in front of many people and in return I got appreciation. I performed in a famous play called Romeo and Juliet written by William Shakespeare. Beautiful play and I remember one quote from our play "Don't waste your love on somebody, who doesn't value it. "
Performing art gave me an opportunity to speak your inner voice with confidence. It develops your skills in many ways. There does not seem to be any barrier for the ideas one wishes to create. It gave me immense pleasure and there was no stress or worries. First we listen to the play and choose our character and then play that character. We actually feel the character.
I always enjoyed in this class but I had never missed any of lectures of my regular classes. Because I know that if I don't concentrate on my studies I will not secure good marks. So, I always maintain a balance between both the classes.
In conclusion, I would say that performing art was my most interesting class. I am happy that I attended this class. I learnt how to be patient and the most important that how to speak confidently and fearlessly as now I am in the profession where I have to speak confidently.
