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e_nicole08   
Aug 15, 2013
Undergraduate / Honors, fame, and glory. Who doesn't want it? - applying to Honor's College [2]

The overall topic of the essay was great! Hope these few comments help!

Also, an honor student need, to a certain extent, to develop and demonstrate certain leadership abilities.

I want to push myself to see if I can accomplished my goals and task,

The fluidity of these sentences are questionable and imply both singular and plural subjects.

With the Honor's degree as a symbol of wisdom and character by my side, I am certain that I will be able to have confidence as well as the ethics to not only carries on, but also to be successful in the face of whatever comes my way in the venture of my major.

This sentence seems to be a bit wordy. I like what you were getting at, but try to do so in fewer words.

Lastly, "I" seemed to be repetitive especially in the second paragraph.

Good luck in getting into Honors College!
e_nicole08   
Aug 15, 2013
Undergraduate / Occupational Therapy Personal Statement on Importance of Adapting. Need Suggestions. [3]

What is success? What is failure? Where is the line drawn?

History implies success is financial prosperity, impeccable health, and a prominent status. If that's the case, when financial trouble occur, health declines, or status is altered, are they then considered a failure? No. What if we ignored the term failure all together and instead viewed the situation as a challenge, an opportunity to conquer.

When observing in an Inpatient Rehabilitation clinic, an elderly man, who recently suffered a stroke, proclaimed "It must be difficult to believe that at one point I was an athlete." In his particular case he had weakness in his lower extremities which significantly impaired his balance leaving him temporarily reliant on a wheelchair. With genuine sincerity his therapist immediately replied "Life happens." At that instant, the purpose for an Occupational Therapist made perfect sense. Life may happen at any moment, whether it may be a stroke, learning disability, or any sort of trauma, but that doesn't leave us void of responsibility. We must adapt to whatever is thrown our way. That way when the world screams failure, we can reply back that we are a fighter, a conquerer. Even more so, through therapy and advancements in the medical field their are a multitude of options to assist in performing everyday activities independently.

Every single day, whatever life throws at us, we have a choice. To give in and settle, or to fight. It's all a matter of perspective.
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