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Aug 27, 2013
Scholarship / I did not have an American dream; QuestBridge Scholarship / Biographical essay [11]
When you say
to people inexperienced with guitars (or even those with basic guitar knowledge; for example, me) will have difficulty understanding what you mean by "altered"
although it has a nice flow as it is now, if you explain somehow that this means switching the strings to play left handed, then the sentence will have more meaning (important because it is indeed the last sentence.
Good luck! I am also applying this year
When you say
If the strings of the guitar are never altered, I will never play.
to people inexperienced with guitars (or even those with basic guitar knowledge; for example, me) will have difficulty understanding what you mean by "altered"
although it has a nice flow as it is now, if you explain somehow that this means switching the strings to play left handed, then the sentence will have more meaning (important because it is indeed the last sentence.
Good luck! I am also applying this year
