Undergraduate / My introduction is about having a good career and a happy fulfilling personal life. [4]

Very good start, unlike me. Now u need 3 boby paragraphs so "There are three important reasons such as time, family and stress.. " each one for a reason.

Ofc you conclusion well be kinda like your introduction but more of saying the 3 main reasons. Hope that helps.

Writing Feedback / Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some mea [3]

Good essay over all i think u need some more writing at the end, your conclusion is a bit to short.
Over all good Job!