johnnynguyen
Sep 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / My Holiday (quick weekend) essay [6]
so instead of (kind of) what else should i use? April April?
so instead of (kind of) what else should i use? April April?
johnnynguyen
Sep 5, 2013
johnnynguyen
Sep 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / My Holiday (quick weekend) essay [6]
Hi. I'm Johnny Nguyen and I'm new to website. I'm trying to improve my English as much as possible. I was asked to write about the last weekend which was the Labour day i think.
If i make any mistake. Please correct it for me. Thank you!
Last weekend passed so quick with me. I spent most of the time to work at the restaurant in summer. There was a few things to worry about before school start such as new clothes, material and equipment. On Saturday, I got on the bus with some friends to Metrotown for shopping with 200 dollars in my pocket. I was kind of worried about spent enough for necessary stuffs. I got two jeans and three t-shirt. My friends suggested that I look cool in those. Then we went around stores to find a barber shop to get my haircut done. It's even harder to find a Chinese restaurant shopping mall so we went to McDonald instead. As the sun set was the time I arrived home to get ready for tomorrow. My best friend texted me to ask about school just before I fell sleep. On Sunday was the busy day, I woke up early as usual and waited for the bus with the same feelings. I arrived the restaurant half hour later like I expected. The boss wasn't there until lunch to I just started to fill the soups and food supplies. I kept my mind busy that I can't think about repeated ESL level 3. What a sad thing for me. Sometime it was like a flash back that make me feel even more disappointed. I finished off Sunday went home for FA dinner. I would like to call it FA because I cooked, ate and cleaned up alone.
Hi. I'm Johnny Nguyen and I'm new to website. I'm trying to improve my English as much as possible. I was asked to write about the last weekend which was the Labour day i think.
If i make any mistake. Please correct it for me. Thank you!
Last weekend passed so quick with me. I spent most of the time to work at the restaurant in summer. There was a few things to worry about before school start such as new clothes, material and equipment. On Saturday, I got on the bus with some friends to Metrotown for shopping with 200 dollars in my pocket. I was kind of worried about spent enough for necessary stuffs. I got two jeans and three t-shirt. My friends suggested that I look cool in those. Then we went around stores to find a barber shop to get my haircut done. It's even harder to find a Chinese restaurant shopping mall so we went to McDonald instead. As the sun set was the time I arrived home to get ready for tomorrow. My best friend texted me to ask about school just before I fell sleep. On Sunday was the busy day, I woke up early as usual and waited for the bus with the same feelings. I arrived the restaurant half hour later like I expected. The boss wasn't there until lunch to I just started to fill the soups and food supplies. I kept my mind busy that I can't think about repeated ESL level 3. What a sad thing for me. Sometime it was like a flash back that make me feel even more disappointed. I finished off Sunday went home for FA dinner. I would like to call it FA because I cooked, ate and cleaned up alone.
