Posts by lehahaiphuong

lehahaiphuong

Oct 3, 2013

Undergraduate / Smith creates an environment where I can proudly do what I love! [4]

I have edited it again , can you give me some idea on this one ?
Why Smith essay (limit to 100 words )
I am tired of trying to do everything a man can do so I can be treated equally ,and Smith creates an environment where I can proudly do what I love as a woman being her very own self. I am tired of people telling me how my eloquence is not that of a lawyer ,and Smith enables me to do what I believe. I am tired of being alone, and Smith brings me the sisters from all over the world ,who will carry with me the same identity to the rest of my life -Smithie- a woman of Smith Generation.

lehahaiphuong

Oct 1, 2013

Undergraduate / Smith creates an environment where I can proudly do what I love! [4]

Why Smith ? ( limit to 100 words)
Smith College makes me proud, of itself ,and of women. They have independently built a school , creating a perfect environment for girls to find not only their integrity but also happiness. When I saw a picture of Smithies lying on the grass enjoying one sunny day , this pride transformed into my love for Smith. Because in the picture , I could see the sisterhood was in the air, and extraordinarily I felt myself belonged .I desire to be called "a Smithie- a women of Smith generation" , an identity I would carry to the rest of my life.

Ps: I don't know if I am being too general ? Should I write about something more specific ? truthfully speaking, it's the spirit rahter than the importance of academic that has made me love Smith . I would appreciate all the help