Undergraduate / great culture and location; University of Michigan - Supplemental Essay (#2) [4]

It's a really great start to your supplement. But while reading it I felt like I was reading more of a brochure for the school and a general overview. Definitely incorporate more details. Talk about what exact classes, what exact clubs/programs, maybe even research on their website about a specific faculty member. They wanna know that you are really in love with the school and know a lot about it.