Writing Feedback / Study English in an English-speaking Country is the best ? [4]

Studying a language is a great advantage for our lives. If we can learn language like English,We can communicate with many people from many where .Studying English in an English-speaking country such as Britain,America,Australia is better but it is not only way to learn English.

In the first place,Studying overseas give you many chances to practice your English skills by communicating with native speakers. It is obvious that in order to perfect English skills as your second language you need an English-speaking environment where you can practice your English skill everywhere in anytime in the most effective and convenient way.Living in a country where people living there use English in their daily communication encourages you to use English everyday. You cannot use your language to talk with others from different countries. You have to use English,which is common language between you and them. In order to communicate with them that forcing you use English very actively. I think that it's the best way to learn a new language. You spend more time for communication and talking,your English will be better. Secondly,you can access gigantic libraries and modern labs which can't easy appear in your country. Not only that, you can study with well-known professors and lecturers so you can receive more pratical skills and deeper knowledge. Listening to your professors in your classes , talking with your friends before and after school,reading books and do your homeworks ,from that you can have one more times to perfect your skills. Thirdly, It's is undeniable that studying English includes not only applying grammatical rules,remembering vocabularies,reading or writing assignments but also understanding the culture of native speaker in the country you are living in.Knowing more about their culture will bring you more chances to understand them as well as choose a better way to express your ideas that they can easier to understand you. You can not integrate into them if you can just say something boring and rigid, It will be interesting if you can understand that they are joking after that you can choose a joke return to make them laugh and you can see that the culture barrier will be suddenly disappeared suddenly.

Finally, I would say that studying English in an English-speaking country is very good but is not the only way to improve your English skills. English is the international language so the English study is now popular and available in almost country,it is taught from elementary school to university so student can master English grammar,reading and writing. Besides learning English at schools or universities you can join in some English class,English Club or English forums in local areas or over the internet to practice English. In addition,there are many books,stories,magazines and documents writen in English in the bookstores or in the internet. You can easy to got them and you can improve your English skills very easily and conveniently without studying English overseas. Furthermore, studying English at your home country is less stressful than doing it in foreign country because you can near your close friends ,your family and you must not care about pressure of culture barrier or accommodation fee and tuition fee.

In conclusion, although learning English in an English speaking country brings many benefits to students, but it is reasonable that you can improve your English skills in your country if you study hard and regular practice.

Writing Feedback / It's better to live in a small town than a big city [2]

Hi everybody!
Today I have to write essay : " It's better to live in small town than a big city" I have just finished it and i need your help to make my essay better. please read,comment and give me some advices or idea. Thanks you :)

My Essay :
Nowaday, People often have 2 selection for their living place. Some people prefer to live in small town and Others prefer to live in the big city. I think one of the most important decisions that human have to take is to choose his living place where you can feel more comfortable,more suitable and happier. Peronally, I think setting down in modern big city is more beneficial. Through my essay I will analyze one of the most important reasons which is Chance of having a better carreer.

Big cities has bigger market, companies or corporations are more famous so of course you can have more chance to found a better work . I have a same age friend. He study IT in an university in Thai Nguyen city , It's a city which smaller than Ha Noi capital. He graduated from a famous university but after 1 year in Thai Nguyen he still unemployed

Because number of companies fewer means you will have less chance. There are too many student graduated from university each year but number of companies is only slightly increased. Many student together apply in to one company. Having too much CV of employees but employment in the company are limited so maybe you must to win hundred of people,who applied together with you in order to have employment in the company and my close friend can't do that.

After that I advice him to go to Ha Noi to find another chance and he agreed. He went to Ha Noi and applied to some companies. Amazing! Having 3 companies want to contract with him after only 2 months. He contracted with FPT corporation and work as a Software Specialist about computer. Now he still work there and feeling very happy when being a FPT's staff. From this example we can see that there are more activities in big cities that help people to expose their chance. It is clear from the example that we can have better opportunities in big cities.

In a nutshell, I am still positive living in big city is Hanoi where will allow me have better work chance. And I believe that many people will move to here for the same reason.