Undergraduate / "Pandora's Box" - Common App essay [5]


awkwardly phrased. consider rephrasing


does not make sense

Essays / Common app essay format question (is it double-spaced, 12 Times?) [8]

you should not add double spacing to your essay.
only separate the paragraphs
help with mine :)

Undergraduate / Standing motionless at the white doorway, I stared at rows of unfamiliar faces; Purdue Uni [4]

rather than listing broad transitions from one area to another, you should be more detailed and mention specific incidents.
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