Posts by trinhan5795 Name: Nhan Lam Duong
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Effects of computers on children/youth [7]
The best way to do this is to research about the topic before writing it. Beside that, you can link the benefit and dis-benefit of yourself using computer as examples. Basically, your overall essay will contain at least four paragraph. The first introduces about the computers. The second describe the good while the third describe the bad. You have to give examples to support your opinions (for example: computers are good for kids to develop their brain. In 2005, an American University has proven this idea after experiencing tons of computer-users." Finally, the final paragraph is to end the story. Good luck on it. Hope I can help you. And guess what, I'm not a Native English Speaker also.
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