Talilah
Nov 21, 2013
Undergraduate / I want to challenge myself; Bowdoin (prompt 1: Intellectual engagement) [4]
When I finally understand an idea or concept that has been unclear to me, a gear clicks into place; it's the best feeling in the world. I enjoy school and my subjects, thanks to some inspiring and engaging teachers I have had in the past-In part, I certainly owe my progress as a student, thus far, to them. I have been taught not just to memorize and repeat information, but to absorb it, process it, and generate potent questions when difficult topics are discussed, debated, and analyzed. These are skills I aim to improve and further develop with help and guidance in the next four years.
I work hard at my academics, not because my parents put pressure on me to do well, but because I challenge myself to see what I'm capable of (the "sibling rivalry" I have with my twin sister doesn't hurt, either). I have pushed myself in school by taking honors and AP classes because I know that, if I put in the time and effort, I can always rise to the demands. I most respect people who struggle to develop and expand their understandings; it makes me happy to similarly try my best, even if it does occasionally cause me stress. My ambition and my determination to be part of a strong, academic community of dedicated learners is what attracts me most to Bowdoin College.
-- I went over it with my teacher and this is what I have now :) thanks for your input!
When I finally understand an idea or concept that has been unclear to me, a gear clicks into place; it's the best feeling in the world. I enjoy school and my subjects, thanks to some inspiring and engaging teachers I have had in the past-In part, I certainly owe my progress as a student, thus far, to them. I have been taught not just to memorize and repeat information, but to absorb it, process it, and generate potent questions when difficult topics are discussed, debated, and analyzed. These are skills I aim to improve and further develop with help and guidance in the next four years.
I work hard at my academics, not because my parents put pressure on me to do well, but because I challenge myself to see what I'm capable of (the "sibling rivalry" I have with my twin sister doesn't hurt, either). I have pushed myself in school by taking honors and AP classes because I know that, if I put in the time and effort, I can always rise to the demands. I most respect people who struggle to develop and expand their understandings; it makes me happy to similarly try my best, even if it does occasionally cause me stress. My ambition and my determination to be part of a strong, academic community of dedicated learners is what attracts me most to Bowdoin College.
-- I went over it with my teacher and this is what I have now :) thanks for your input!
