Undergraduate / 'My mom's treatments' - University of texas essay B [5]

Wow what a touching story.
It seems you answered the question properly.
Though some sentence seems to be bit long.
Wonder if you can cut into two peices or so.
Other than that I really think it is great essay.

Scholarship / 250-word scholarship essay about being a triplet - feedback [6]

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