Writing Feedback / Toefl Essay- How do movies and TV Influence our behavior? [4]

Movies and TV are the medium of entertainment. It became an important part of our lives. People watch TV to get entertain. However the definition of entertainment varies person to person. Some people get entertain by watching movies, serials, realty shows and other are get entertain by watching news, discovery channel etc. TV and movies directly affected our behavior.

To begin with, Young generation has been affected by TV and moivies most. Everyone has their role model and they want to become like this. Since young generation is too mature to relate real life and fictions life hence sometime they just do the thing whatever their role model does. By way of example if they saw their hero smokes, drinks or take drugs they just copy it. Hence gradually they get involve in bad habits.

In addition to that, most of the womens wants to look like her favourite TV serial character. Because of this they buy expensive cltoh, gwellery, shoes etc. Since they try to appear just like her role model they just forgetting their own identity. Every person is unique and no one should forget his own internal beauty.

Finally, Movies and TV changes parents behaviour towards kids as well. They just try to become a copy of fiction. Some time it is good for kids and parents both. They learn how to teach kid and how to make our kid a good person. But sometime fiction are so dramatic that in real life it doesn't happen. By way of example I remember, when I was young my favorite serial was "Jindagi Hamari Tumhari" . It was an indian family drama. This serial showed how a parent gave all of his money to their children however he was suffering from the cancer and he need money for the treatment. I think it doesn't happen in real life. We should consider our priorities first. What happen his kid if he died.

By way of conclusion I think TV and movies has made us to live two life at a time. One is our role model and other is we own.

Writing Feedback / Toefl - Should teenagers have paid jobs while they are students? be independent [4]

Everyone likes independence in ones' life either it is kid,teenager or adult. Either it is in form of job or in the form of decision making power. In case of teenagers, if they do job with their study then I think they will know the importance of money and they will spend them carefully. There is a some reason below there which supports my statement.

To begin with, I believe teenager will gain self confidence if they do paid job with their study. They will learn money saving skills and will spend it where is the need. I remember, in my college days I used to do part time job. Because of this I didn't need to depend on anyone else. I used to do all of my work by my own.

In addition to that, I think it will make their financial condition better. Every parents want their kids gain good education but good education is very expensive and seems is not possible for everyone. Part time job will not only provide teenagers financially strong but also they will afford expencive education too.

Finally, They will gain work experience by doing paid job. Nowadays there is a very strong competition among graduates. Every year millions of talented students finishes their study and comes to the jobs. If you don't have work experience then it will become difficult to get the job. Experience will give them better future in jobs after their graduation. I remember in my college days I used to do making sites and it helped in my job interview.

By way of conclusion I am of the opinion that teenagers should do paid job while they are student it will not only make financly stron but also they will gain some working experience too.